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Posted: October 21st, 2024, 1:00 pm
by Katat0nik
No month of May
No twinkling stars
Shearing shears pulled the wool
from my skin and left me bare
Under its gaze
It never sees beyond me
God I
wish it would
Look away
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Posted: October 21st, 2024, 3:43 pm
by PenOfDamocles
What is this? What does this mean?
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Posted: October 21st, 2024, 5:18 pm
by Katat0nik
oh, nothing. Just something I wrote.
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Posted: October 21st, 2024, 5:35 pm
by PenOfDamocles
Sorry, just being paranoid. It reminded me of something, I'm just not sure what.
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Posted: October 23rd, 2024, 12:36 pm
by Katat0nik
I don't think there is such a thing as being paranoid. If you had to describe what it reminded you of, the feeling it gave you, what would it be?
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Posted: October 23rd, 2024, 3:03 pm
by PenOfDamocles
I’m not sure…helplessness, inevitability. Something I was meant to forget. I’m sure it’s nothing.
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Posted: October 23rd, 2024, 4:20 pm
by Katat0nik
It may just be that I was successful with the poem in expressing the feelings I had when I wrote it. In any case, you aren't alone in those feelings, Pen.
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Posted: October 23rd, 2024, 6:43 pm
by WiltedRoses
funny with everything going on i stopped poetry but i feet inspired by this one . i dont know if its a response or just a shared felling maybe both.
The Vast perfection of emptiness.
Skitters on the void of time.
Calling " find me the lie I told ".
Tears fall like diamonds we call stars.
Seeking mercy for there owner.
Would you call me a liar ,
Or do you weep also.
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Posted: October 24th, 2024, 11:53 am
by Katat0nik
WiltedRoses wrote: ↑October 23rd, 2024, 6:43 pm
funny with everything going on i stopped poetry but i feet inspired by this one . i dont know if its a response or just a shared felling maybe both.
The Vast perfection of emptiness.
Skitters on the void of time.
Calling " find me the lie I told ".
Tears fall like diamonds we call stars.
Seeking mercy for there owner.
Would you call me a liar ,
Or do you weep also.
Lovely, Wilt.
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Posted: October 27th, 2024, 5:06 pm
by JPalmer
That's beautiful, Kat.
It invokes in me the feeling of staying in the sun, strangely.